inthesk0519 发表于 2022-10-28 12:03   全显示 1楼
农村文很难写,故事以一个早年丧父的年青人高考后的某一日开始着笔,把农村各种关系逐渐打开,一个嫉妒的大娘,一个对自己的寡母垂涎欲滴的当村主任的色大伯,一个守寡多年辛苦操劳把自己抚养成人的寡妇美母,还有一个主人翁,这故事有很大的伏笔,是写母子情,还是自己勾引伯母,还是上大学后的大学情事,让人有了读下去的兴趣。
        俗话说,好的开头是成功的一半,用这句话来判断,此文定是精彩,充满期待!
喜欢作者的文笔,那种娓娓道来的写法,真的不错哦!
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